The in-between chapters are my favorite reads through out the book… They seem like they are a narrative and a lot of them lack emotion. They seem like that are thoughts.
In chapter five it describes how the shooting went, and the reader can see how there is very little emotion.
notes: no emotion, Hemingway controls the emotions, detail about the scene
Krebs acquired the nausea in regard to experience that is the result of untruth or exaggeration, and when he occasionally met another man who had really been a soldier and they talked a few minutes in the dressing room at a dance he fell into the easy pose of the old soldier among other soldiers: that he had been badly, sickeningly frightened all the time. In this way he lost everything. (70)
Hemingway, Ernest. In Our Time. New York: Scribner, 2003. Print.
Notes: This passage shows the trouble Krebs has adjusting to life as a civilian. He doesn’t feel comfortable talking to other people about his experiences so he often lies and uses stories he has heard from others. The only time he seems to be at ease is when he is with other soldiers, showing that he is still in a war like mentality. Being with other soldiers give him a sense of acceptance and solidarity.
“They were seated in the boat, Nick in the stern, his father rowing. The sun was coming up over the hills. A bass jumped, making a circle in the water. Nick trailed his hand in the water. It felt warm in the sharp chill of the morning. In the early morning on the lake sitting in the stern of the boat with his father rowing, he felt quite sure that he would never die” (19).
Ernest, H. (2003). In our time. (p. 19). New York: Simon & Schuster.
Notes: After seeing new life and death within minutes of each other, young Nick does not think he is going to die. This is a common trait that young children and even young adults share: they do not think that aging like their parents is possible and that it is very far off. Additionally, Nick may not think he will ever die because he feels so alive with a new day ahead.